I have to admit, the flow back to back is excellent. Better than expected as I haven't actually seen them combined properly.
The scruple I had with it - a nitpick in the first place - is Lord Vader's pretense at around 8:15 in the video about several transmissions being beamed to that ship. The earlier 'this is a diplomatic mission' exchange could be excused as Vader simply humoring the rebel but this bit rolls off oddly when the simplest way to respond would have been 'this ship ejected from a rebel ship and I saw it so cut the nonsense'. However seeing them back to back it is minor enough that I can say 'eh' and excuse it as a minor retcon of a single line which is overridden by Vader's response to her diplomatic mission argument before being taken away. What I'd thought initially and what I retained was a little more exaggerated than what I see in direct comparison and otherwise the cinematics blend very nicely, so thank you for calling my assumption.
Editing in since we're on this point and I looked it up further, it seems a short story compilation, From a Certain Point of View had one entry, the perspective of Captain Antilles that presents a time gap indicating these are not meant to be taken back to back - lending credibility to the diplomatic mission pretense and strengthening this transition. Apparently as well however these short stories can be contradictory and aren't the best example, but it's better than nothing. Someone with firsthand experience of these compilations would need to comment because despite being a fan I am not a dedicated collector and I can only look these things up online, without clear quotations.